Jessica has a great job and may love what she does, but unfortunately, this description will not spark any attraction or interest. So let’s transform the example above into the kind of writing that others will take notice of. Wink…” In the revised profile example, Jessica now appears unique, stands out from the competition, demonstrates various aspects of her personality, reveals qualities men are attracted to (helping others, being silly, etc.), displays nothing but positive energy, shows a passion for her daily life, demonstrate humor with a playful joke, and innocently flirts with the reader.
Let’s take a look at a common example of a profile that is way too demanding and sends off negative energy.“The right woman for me needs to be beautiful, active, and very intelligent.If you care more about money than happiness, or live outside of the city, please move on, I’m only looking to date local.” While the words will differ from profile to profile, I see profiles similar to the example above all the time.For the better half of a decade I have been writing online dating profiles for men and women all over the world.And if there is one thing I can assure you, it is that the written portion of your profile is absolutely critical to the overall success you will have.
The written portion of your profile is a direct reflection of who you are, what you represent, and why someone else should want to date you. As someone who has been helping online daters at a success rate of over 99% since 2009, I can easily get you on the path to success.
With countless people competing for the same dates online, you need to be operating with nothing short of an amazing profile that is optimized towards generating interest and attracting high quality singles. Here at Next Evolution Matchmaking, the goal isn’t to just attract any man or woman. In this profile writing tutorial, I am going to take two poorly written online dating profile examples, and show you how to transform them into profiles that will attract the type of attention you are looking for.
One of the biggest mistakes people make with writing a profile is blending into the masses.
You may have a great personality and a wide variety of interests that others would find attractive, but if you don’t know how to write about these things in ways that will spark interest, you will find yourself with minimal results at best.
In this part of the tutorial, I am going to take a common profile example that would fail to stand out from the crowd, and then re-write it in a way that is optimized towards making others take notice.
“Hey my name is Jessica, I run a 10th grade drama program, and I love my job.” So what’s wrong with the online dating profile example above?